Homework for October

I wrote to fix my Descriptive writing assignment. First, I think grammar is a best problem in my essay. Second, my essay is inclined to te middle & high school story. Third I think Vocabulary power is shorted.
The level looks low like an elementary schoolchild wrote. The last thing is sentences power's shortage.
I don't know how sentences is written.

Homework for september 28st

<Description of my face>
1. My cheeks swell such as a inflating balloon.
2. My dark circle is drawing under eyes like a shadow.
3. My side of the head is come out as buds.
4. My cheekbone is protruded like a rabbit teeth.
5. My nostrill is a circle like a ball.
6. I have a straight ridge of the nose like a heavy mountain.
7. My eyelids looks heavy like a hanging heavy stones.
8. My face's color is dark as a tanning skin.

Homework for September 21st

 If i died tomorrow, I want to eat shrimp cream pasta. Because my favorite food is shrimp and cream pasta. And cream pasta will smell like a sesame oil. Also, shrimp will taste like a chewy cheese.
 If i died tomorrow, I want to go to Europe with my boy friend. Because one of my dream is trip in Europe with my lover. It'll feel like a fly. And it'll look like a peaceful or happy scene. For example, One couple trips in ship like a titanic movie scene. Also, it'll heard like a amusing music.